While Tom was following the secret gang, he knew that if he got caught, he would be in the biggest trouble ever all because he wanted to join the adventurous gang. He had even threatened to snitch on them!
In the boring Children’s ward, that was manged by a horrible Matron who hated children, were a group of children called the Midnight Gang.
I changed your original sentence into two sentences. Why do you think I did this?
Miss Goddard