I went about my usual business collecting bottle-tops. The beach’s warm, soft sand glistened in the sunlight, yet it was surrounded by a rusty, towering concrete wall. That’s when I first saw the bizarre,baffling thing. A curious, peculiar thing indeed.
star-we really like how you used the boys yet instead of but.
star-we liked all the adjectives you used.
wish-you missed a comma in your 3AD.