A few years ago, on what appeared to be a humdrum day, suddenly turned into a bizarre day…
I went about my usual business collecting bottle-tops, The beach’s warm,silky sand glistened in the sunlight, but was ruined by an old,to concrete wall.That’s when I first saw the sad thing.A sad,lonely,odd thing indeed.
I must have stared at it for a while.I meant it had a really weird look about it – a sad lost sort of look .Do you know what I meant?It had green,slimy tentacles and it had crab like pincers that had a bell attached to them.When it stood up,it shot a beach ball at me.I threw it back and it seemed really kind-hearted.
Star- Me and Will love your use of adjectives.
Star- Also me and Will liked your use of “Do you know what I meant?”
Wish- You need to put mean instead of meant (Past tense).
WWW I like how you used the words humdrum and bizarre.
EBI Maybe you could think of a different word for kind-hearted.