Many moons ago, on what appeared to be a humdrum day, suddenly turned into an out-of-the-ordinary day…
I went about usual business collecting bottle-tops.The beach’s feet-warming, powdery sand glistened in the sunlight, but was destroyed by an over-sized abandoned wall. That`s when I first saw the thing. That`s when I first saw the odd thing. An odd, confusing, unknown thing indeed.
Star- I really like how you described the sand as feet-warming.
Star- I like your choice of words.
Wish- You could have made the reader think about it a bit more and you haven`t put a comma in one of your 2ads.